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My 1st try @ an Inuyasha poem! Tell me what you think!

Genre: Poetry, Romance
Pairing: Inuyasha/Kagome
Summary: Kagome's thoughts on seeing Inuyasha again after the 3 year seperation

The one I love is in the past
How I fell for him so fast
We departed 3 years ago today
It’s hard to keep my tears at bay
He is always and forever in my thoughts
From the kind word we shared to the times we fought
I wonder if he thinks of me
Or if I’m just a memory
I sit here alone in the dark
Waiting for my journey to embark
I plead the well one last time
Take me home, let him be mine
And by surprise I see the blue
The blue that leads me back to you
I kiss my mom and brother goodbye
Wiping away the tears I cried
I jump into the familiar abyss
Thinking about our very first kiss
I emerge from the well an see your face
You immediately wrap me in your embrace
I feel so safe here in you arms
I know that nothing will bring me harm
No words are needed to be spoken
My heart is healed, no longer broken
You are here and you’re all I need
Let’s take our journey, with you in the lead

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Date: 2008-10-14 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chanelamore.livejournal.com
Aww, that is such a sweet poem :) Nice job!

Date: 2008-10-14 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
thank you :D

Date: 2008-10-14 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kmoaton.livejournal.com
You did a really good job

Date: 2008-10-14 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
thanks so much! :D

Date: 2008-10-14 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xxsecretive.livejournal.com
i-it's beautiful! great, great job =D

Date: 2008-10-14 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
arigato! hehe thank you so much :D

Date: 2008-10-14 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hushedlove.livejournal.com
I think you did a excellent job on this poem. I think it's sweet, and not only just sweet, I think it's beautiful too. :)

Date: 2008-10-14 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
aw, thanks so much!!

Date: 2008-10-14 11:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] palereverie.livejournal.com
that's a really great poem!

Date: 2008-10-14 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
thank you :D

Date: 2008-10-14 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] furousha.livejournal.com
very sweet! :D loved it!

Date: 2008-10-14 12:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
thank you! it means alot to me that you guys like it :D
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Date: 2008-10-14 02:53 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-14 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vikikibouki.livejournal.com
AHA!

Told you that you could do it! It's fantastic!!

Now why don't you post it on ED & let other people tell you the same thing as me?!

Date: 2008-10-14 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! and already done. My screename there is ButtercupN87. I'm pretty much ButtercupN87 everywhere except here :D

Date: 2008-10-14 05:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vikikibouki.livejournal.com
You are welcome, my friend.

Date: 2008-10-14 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inugrrrl.livejournal.com
That was very, very cute!!
You've definitely got a talent for this.
Make more! :D

Date: 2008-10-14 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
Thank you! I shall! Lookin forward to it :D
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Date: 2008-10-14 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
thank you so much!

Date: 2008-10-14 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fruit-a-licious.livejournal.com
Love the poem, it goes good with the song My Will - Dream which I am listening to now =D

Date: 2008-10-14 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
ah yes, I ♥ that song! and thank you :D

Date: 2008-10-14 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twilightyuna6.livejournal.com
Aw, that's so sweet! I'm so glad that she eventually found her way back to him ^_^

Date: 2008-10-15 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browneyedmami.livejournal.com
thank you! and I know, me too :D

Date: 2008-10-15 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] broadwaybabe11.livejournal.com
Good job! But I'm more of an InuKik girl. I ship Kikyo with other people too, but for canon, I prefer InuKik.

Date: 2010-01-23 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurasuchi.livejournal.com
Excellent! I totally love your portrayal of Kagome, that's for sure!
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