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My 1st try @ an Inuyasha poem! Tell me what you think!

Genre: Poetry, Romance
Pairing: Inuyasha/Kagome
Summary: Kagome's thoughts on seeing Inuyasha again after the 3 year seperation

The one I love is in the past
How I fell for him so fast
We departed 3 years ago today
It’s hard to keep my tears at bay
He is always and forever in my thoughts
From the kind word we shared to the times we fought
I wonder if he thinks of me
Or if I’m just a memory
I sit here alone in the dark
Waiting for my journey to embark
I plead the well one last time
Take me home, let him be mine
And by surprise I see the blue
The blue that leads me back to you
I kiss my mom and brother goodbye
Wiping away the tears I cried
I jump into the familiar abyss
Thinking about our very first kiss
I emerge from the well an see your face
You immediately wrap me in your embrace
I feel so safe here in you arms
I know that nothing will bring me harm
No words are needed to be spoken
My heart is healed, no longer broken
You are here and you’re all I need
Let’s take our journey, with you in the lead

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browneyedmami: (fall in love)
This is the second fanfiction I've ever written.

Enjoy, comment, review. Don't just say "that was good" or "that sucks" tell me WHY it was good or why it sucked. If you give me a nasty response with no explanation or constructive criticism I will erase your comment and block you.

Genre: Romance
Pairing: Inu/Kag
Warnings: none
Summary: Kagome talks about her "type" of man, and Inuyasha tries his best to become this man for her (sry, I suck at summaries)

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browneyedmami: (forever)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I don't know what I'm gonna do w/myself now that its over. No more waiting for new chapters. *sigh*

Heres my review (dont read if you havent read the last chp yet):



Sango and Miroku: I'm glad that they're happily married, and the kids are just tooo cute! Of course Sango "bore his children" LOL. And Miroku is still himself, charging obscene prices for his services lol It was nice to see him and Inuyasha still working as a team.

Kohaku: Honestly, and don't get mad, but I think he should've died. Not because I didn't like him or anything, but because the jewel shard was the only thing holding his life together but yet he didn't die from it being taken out. His ending w/Tootosai was ok, but didn't do much for me.

Rin: Kinda suprised she went w/Kaede. That wasn't something I expected. I'm glad she's learning new things though, and that Sesshomaru isn't totally out of the picture.

Sesshomaru: I don't know why they didn't give him a better ending. Not much was said about him. Jaken of course is still at his side. It made me laugh when Kagome called him brother-in -law though.heh.

Shippou: I'm glad he's finally learning and growing stronger. I'm sure he'll grow to be powerful if he keeps trying.

Inuyasha and Kagome: AWWWWWW! It took 3 years, but there was still lots of love. I'm glad to see them back together. It is kind of sad that she can't time travel to see her family anymore though. I would've liked a kiss, but eh, maybe in her artbook or if they do a movie.

Koga: WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO HIM? lol Nothing was said about him at all!

well, thats my summary heh.

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